Monday, 10 September 2012

sences poem


 Thorton Beach Camp

Gigantic ,scary waves crashing in the sea .
The salty stinky water fills my nose as I swim in the lagoon .
The boys cheering because someone caught a stinky ,huge fish .
The freezing cold water makes me shiver as I jump in and out of the water                                                    The horrible ,yuck custard that was burnt by the cook .
Camp is amazing and fun. I wish I could stay forever


Teina

1 comment:

  1. well done i feel like i am at the beach right now you rock :)

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